Comments : Moments Like This

  • 16 years ago

    by unspokken

    When I read this I think about my best friend because this is exactally how I feel.
    I loved it and it matchs my condition perfectly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww!..this poem was terribly sweet!!
    I absolutly loved it!

    I like how you kept repeating

    "It's moments like this
    That brings about a feeling
    That you just can't miss
    It's simply healing"

    ^^that was really nice. and it added a nice effect of how u kept repeating it. it's also my favorite stanza.

    Great job hun.
    Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    Aww that was cute Gougie!
    was that for you and Lakin? =]
    btw,... I need your yearbook!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aw!!....this was sooo sweet!!!!! i loved it..

    "It's moments like this
    That brings about a feeling
    That you just can't miss
    It's simply healing"
    ^^ my fav. stanza!!

    great job hun!
    5/5
    Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Haha..i had already commented this before..excpet ina different name!..sorry!..i still love the poem!..haha
    .
    Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    That was great! Wow LOL you're really good!

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