Comments : Silly God, Control is for Mortals

  • 16 years ago

    by vaibhav shah

    Your anger has been expressed beautifully.But He is more than what you have depicted Him.Your perception is governed by your impulses and our impulses are not right always.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    I really like this poem! this is amazing! you got away from what I've seen you do before, and that was interesting and frankly, blew my mind! fantastic write!