Alive?

by Gabba Gabba Hey   May 9, 2008


Delving into endless night
I can't control myself
I'm heading straight for danger
but all I see is hope
it's strange that my deepest fear
should be all that's left to comfort
to be familiar
it's the only thing that's never left me
I guess that's how it workds when you lie
when you refuse to be truthful
even to yourself
decieved...destroyed, strangely ecstatic
perhaps they were right
I'm broken, I'm disturbed
and through it all...
I'm still alive

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Vaibhav shah really put thoughts to words here in his comment:p brilliant poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by vaibhav shah

    Yes,here comes the reality.One who is broken,disturbed,disappointed can think about living or else others are living oly for the sake of living.When an individual tries to survive in all these circumstances,he emerges as a real victor.A very lovely and thought provoking poem.Your maturity is increasing day by day in such a sincere way that you are soon going to be called a poet-philosopher.