Comments : Alive?

  • 16 years ago

    by vaibhav shah

    Yes,here comes the reality.One who is broken,disturbed,disappointed can think about living or else others are living oly for the sake of living.When an individual tries to survive in all these circumstances,he emerges as a real victor.A very lovely and thought provoking poem.Your maturity is increasing day by day in such a sincere way that you are soon going to be called a poet-philosopher.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Vaibhav shah really put thoughts to words here in his comment:p brilliant poem!