Oh my God! This was so awesome! It had me thinking about how I felt when I was in this position. Great vocabulary btw. It made the poem that much better.

Living each day with your memories well kept,
the harsher reality of rejection to accept.
Countless tears so sublime,
heartache and pain growing in the mind.

^^^THis has got to be my favorite stanza. It was superb. Way to go! thnx for the comment earlier btw. Rejection is hard to accpet. beautiful flow. One of your bests.
your friend,
~Forever Broken~

Wonderful love poem though itz d sad version of love...... u have done it brilliantly.. n u r a master of not only dark poems... but poems of every calibre...

keep it up ash,

Best wishes,

Karan

As karan put it you are the best poet of todays age truely i pail in comparision to you but you are not no one you are someone and i still care about you though your tears beckon submissmive ways never let yourself down for ppl care and want to help truely a grandeur of a poem great work 100/5

best wishes Mike

This poem is really good. Some lines are very captivating. Good work.