Comments : One Wish

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Nice really nice big hugggggggggg

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    Drying up your endless tears
    Time I would erase,
    I'd give anything to make your dreams come true
    So again, you could see her face.

    Favorite lines, deep meaning 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobody

    O my god your so good this peom is truly beautiful and i think your right about it you may loose someone but doesnt mean their gone! it brought tears to my eyes what an amazing writer you are! i love your postive out look on such sad moment in life truly beautiful
    5/5 xxxxxxxxx <33

  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Drying up your endless tears
    Time I would erase,
    I'd give anything to make your dreams come true
    So again, you could see her face.

    I could have sworn when I read this that you were talking to me.
    I love this poem.
    It hit me like a brick.