by sleepybear May 9, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
cyber friendship
In prose and verse he is well rehearsed |
by sleepybear
Thanks for your comment, the 4th stanza probably makes no sense to you as its in reference to a British vehicle road worthy test - the M.O.T. which is a statutory requirement for all road going vehicles here in the UK. The vehicle in question failed as he had an airfreshener dangling from the rear view mirror! |
by H E Losey
Very interesting write, I enjoyed the refrain up to the fourth and fifth stanzas. The fourth confused me while the fifth's last line broke my rythm. After that it took of again. If I could relate to that 4th stanza my good would rise to a 5. As always just an opinion. |