Comments : Taking Risks

  • 20 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    I did a little minor editing to make the poem flow better (made the 1st and 3rd lines of each stanza have the same # of syllables, ditto for the 2nd and 4th; all except the last stanza of course). Not like anyone would prolly have noticed anyways but I just thought I'd point that out :D. Enjoy!