"i know she could love you more than i ever could
the faceless girl that dare stand in the place i wonce stood"

Good imagry

I'm tired of crying
sick of lying
can't keep trying
slowly dieing

good ryhme

great poem, good flow. shows a pain that many don't really know and you express it well in this poem.

I thought it was a good write mate, quite sad and very discriptive, well done, xP