That was very interesting,
i find that almost ironic,
because you are oviously referring
to something you have done, then realized.
so in your poem, saying how it's weired
to do that, you end up doing it right there
and then. i really liked, so true,
5/5

-mandy :)

Nothing struck me as absolutely amazing about this when I read it. It just seems like the average poem about a crush or love/lust. I think you could also work on the structure of this poem, make it interesting. Maybe you could format it so that it's in a cool shape or just even standard stanzas. Also add some emotion. This poem was just all questions that lead the reader nowhere. They seem jumbled and irratic. I think this poem would be much better if it were not all questions, even though that may have been the point. I just think that this poem could be so much more if you just put a little more effort into it.

I would also consider fixing this line--

"Would you ever know if they knew that they were that special person being described?"

It's way too wordy. You could clean it up and make it more straight forward.

Hope this helps.
Bethany

I can relate to this poem so well