Aw so sad...tell your friend i am so very sorry...
i hope she read this b/c she would love it

my best friend just had her grandma die and we all wore OSU to her funeral b/c that's what we know she would have loved

you are such a nice friend
i hope emily is feeling ok!
5/5 definitely !

This poem is kind and truely lets you see that there are some people who can be true friends. This poem is sad, as the death of a person important to you is always sad.
At the begining you started fine, but later on there were no rhymes. The flow was a little rocky and the poem was more than a story.
I'll give it a 4/5

This poem is very sweet. I've written similar ones for friends. It's very thoughtful. Good job.
And thanks for the comment. =]

Beautiful.

Your a very good friend.

And Emily is very lucky to have you.

5/5

xx

What a heartbreaking story! It's encouraging to read that there are people like you out there who provide shoulders to cry on for friends in need. It's a rare thing to see so I applaud you doing what great friends should.

There were moments in this piece where you forced some rhymes and threw off the flow for me but you made it up in your emotion. Well done/ *5/5*

I feel that you have a divinely given gift This poem is very inspiring and comforting

Never stop writting

I cried! thats all that needs to be said...oh and great job