"I ran away from the crowd
I go in, and slam the door
I sit there trembling and shaking
Watch my tears fall to the floor"

Good rhyme scheme in the first stanza.

I liked this poem. It was very emotional and it was in depth which was what made it good. The words just flowed together very well great job :D

Excellent poem indeed. Really nice how you were able to rhyme words while making sense out of them at the same time. Broken heart sux.

I absolutely love this (i know how much it hurts and it sucks they never c how much they hurt us )