Take Me to Your Heart

by eehcuhhhz   May 10, 2008


The full moon takes a closer look
With you and I under its beam.
The stars sparkle in the sky,
Giving us a naughty little gleam.

As you look charmingly in my eyes
With your hands around my waist,
I found no other better moment
Than standing with you, face to face.

Our heart pulse beating faster,
Yet it never collided into one.
A cutting strike reaches my heart,
Knowing the battle has just begun.

Although your desires I control,
It is not the key that I require.
Yet to reach my objective,
I must take care of this fire.

A teasing brush from my lips
Sets off a soft, enticing groan.
Soon your body will stray,
Leaving your core in the unknown.

For my intention with you
Is for us to never depart,
Whereas all you need to do
Is take me to your heart.

**I think I made it end waaaay too quickly. I'm going to put what it's about in the comments. Gimme some feedback on what's in the poem, and what I'm tryin' to write about. I know it's double the work, so I'm really grateful. Peace **

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Very nice poem, simply lovely
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    By far your best piece.

    I really loved the stanza
    'The full moon takes a closer look
    With you and I under its beam.
    The stars sparkle in the sky,
    Giving us a naughty little gleam'

    Really unusual and very soft like the poems nature. I loved this one , fantastic read

    Alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    I loved this poem. i was actually imagining me and my boy while reading this so it was very desciptive. I really liked the 2nd stanza. I dont think you finished it too quickly. i quite enjoyed it.
    Taegan Emily

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    This poem is amazing. The words you used painted a picture in my mind. The ending seems a bit premature, so maaybe you could add another stanza before it. Altogether it was an awesome poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Very romantic and I thought each line was truly breathtaking! I love your style and the flow was perfect! I thought you did wonderful and this poem is just great!