by eehcuhhhz May 10, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
The full moon takes a closer look |
by she
Very nice poem, simply lovely |
By far your best piece. |
I loved this poem. i was actually imagining me and my boy while reading this so it was very desciptive. I really liked the 2nd stanza. I dont think you finished it too quickly. i quite enjoyed it. |
This poem is amazing. The words you used painted a picture in my mind. The ending seems a bit premature, so maaybe you could add another stanza before it. Altogether it was an awesome poem. 5/5 |
Very romantic and I thought each line was truly breathtaking! I love your style and the flow was perfect! I thought you did wonderful and this poem is just great! |