Alright, for those reading.
This is supposed to be about this picture

http://www.namemeaningcertificate.com/Papers/Lovers%202.gif

I added my own version of thigns, what I think it's about and everything.

I'll make this quick. I'll choose only the ones that have hidden meanings.

Our heart pulse beating faster,
Yet it never collided into one.
A cutting strike reaches my heart,
Knowing the battle has just begun.

Maybe I was too subtle? Tell me if I need to be more forward.
That's just a stanza saying that their hearts don't beat together YET, therefore, there's something wrong.

Although your desires I control,
It is not the key that I require.
Yet to reach my objective,
I must take care of this fire.

She doesn't want ONLY his desires for her.
But to reach what she wants, she needs to take care of that desire FIRST.

Soon your body will stray,
Leaving your core in the unknown.

Core=heart.
unknown=love

I BELIEVE the rest are pretty simple.

Just PM me if you find somethign hard to understand.

A very romantic poem with a nice rhyme scheme Astronmical imagery through passionate eyes

Very romantic and I thought each line was truly breathtaking! I love your style and the flow was perfect! I thought you did wonderful and this poem is just great!

This poem is amazing. The words you used painted a picture in my mind. The ending seems a bit premature, so maaybe you could add another stanza before it. Altogether it was an awesome poem. 5/5

I loved this poem. i was actually imagining me and my boy while reading this so it was very desciptive. I really liked the 2nd stanza. I dont think you finished it too quickly. i quite enjoyed it.
Taegan Emily

By far your best piece.

I really loved the stanza
'The full moon takes a closer look
With you and I under its beam.
The stars sparkle in the sky,
Giving us a naughty little gleam'

Really unusual and very soft like the poems nature. I loved this one , fantastic read

Alex xxx

Very nice poem, simply lovely
5/5