Comments : Metaphoric gun ((you placed it in her hands))

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Funny how realitiy
    can be written in blood
    -strong picture
    Bangs her head against a wall
    just to feel the pain
    wonders when it'll be ok,
    be alright again
    -begins great
    good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Very good poem, this is deep.