Picture Perfect

Your long curly hair dressed in dark cloud
To the naughty air a flying shadow to tease
For some a dark waterfall to mesmerize
For, others, the subject of a poet's poetry, sublime

This part of the poem really rocks..may be bcoz I love curly hair:p..kidding
Really ur poem is perfectly written..
I do love the way u write :)
Keep up the good work plz5/5..

Excellent...Brilliant....too gud!

You really have a way with words and really painting a beautiful picture.

Nice job.

This is so amazing ...
I enjoyed in every excellently written stanza. This poem left me in awe. Whole piece is breathtaking. I love your descriptions and choice of words in every stanza and the repetition of "picture perfect" was very effective and it created interesting flow. I like your writing style, it seem like you're truly able to capture remarkable beauty within a poem and this poem is not an exception.

Amaziiiing job
5/5