Nature (550) [[CONTEST]]

by NinjaGirl   May 10, 2008


Nature

before you read, have a look at this picture

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q182/Dancer_In_The_Darkness/nature.jpg

Such beauty that is revealed
Within this poignant piece of artwork,
Not just artwork but a living scenery
Of such lively nature and blooming greenery.

When I look within the depths of this picture
I see a relaxing place that calms my mind
My racing heart, I can no longer hear
For all of my senses are fixated upon this beautiful picture.

I once lived in a world of black and white and grey
But as I look within this picture, I see a place that I could almost call home
There is such life and beauty that it nearly brings me to tears
For, here, I have no doubts, no worries, no fears.

Nature is the most beautiful blessing of all
I can't believe that I've never seen this before
But, with the sun shining in my eyes and the birds chirping in my ears
It's hard not to notice something as beautiful as nature.

~Written for a contest~

©opyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~

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  • Great piece of work... I have a few spelling questions since it was for a contest...

    There is such life *a* beauty that it nearly brings me to tears.

    Did you mean "and" here?

    and

    It's hard not to notice something as beatiuful as nature.

    It's spelled Beautiful baby girl.

    Other than that, I loved the wording and your right, nature is beautiful to look at and I try to make others see it the way I do.... just last night I spent my lunch hour starring at the nights sky and the cresent moon, gazing at the clouds in the sky, just to enjoy the world around me. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    A beautifully written poem, is this for the contest at school? Teehee.
    5/5

    Cheers xo