Comments : Nature (550) [[CONTEST]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    A beautifully written poem, is this for the contest at school? Teehee.
    5/5

    Cheers xo

  • Great piece of work... I have a few spelling questions since it was for a contest...

    There is such life *a* beauty that it nearly brings me to tears.

    Did you mean "and" here?

    and

    It's hard not to notice something as beatiuful as nature.

    It's spelled Beautiful baby girl.

    Other than that, I loved the wording and your right, nature is beautiful to look at and I try to make others see it the way I do.... just last night I spent my lunch hour starring at the nights sky and the cresent moon, gazing at the clouds in the sky, just to enjoy the world around me. :)