This is really good. i like it alot.

it flows nicely

5/5

Well written

"Relentless of the storm,
The reflection never vanished
Underground shedding a new form
The picture still remains "

^^ wonderfully written... very emotional.. and very sad...

keep writing..

Wow , i must say im impressed your an amazing writer!

keep it up big boy
miss you
go on MSN more your never on
xoxoxox
Erin