Comments : Mother .

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    You can be a better person than her, hun. i know that..just those last few lines shows it. be proud that you can be better....even if she's not proud. live for YOUR standards.

    *hugs*

  • 16 years ago

    by BrOkEn HeArT

    OMG!!!! (girl or boy) that is like really sad and i can just feel the hate as i read ur poem! I am sorry that you feel this way and ur going through this but writing is the way to go and never stop telling the truth! jusr rememeber god loves us all! even if we might not no it now!!
    With all my love/ Broken smile aka(Teane)

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Absolutely brilliant. the day will come when Karma kicks the door in and beats her like a hebrew slave. I LOVE YUR WRITING