Leave it just the way it is, and i don't mean maybe.

looking through the eyes of those who destroy us is so hard, monique. i know how hard it is to look through the eyes of a person who's hurt ME.

and i just wanna say...you did it well. and i'm proud of you, hun. honestly.
*hugs*

Wow
very bold but great poem
it must of been hard to write this

Wow, just the fact that you decided to write something looking through the eyes of someone who hurt you is breathtaking, and leave it as it is, it is amazing and i love the ending, it shows u feel he was misunderstood but ur still not excusing him of his actions, beautiful job!
~Toni~

LEAVE IT EXACTLY LIKE THIS. so much deep feelings and emotions. I was shaking my head near the end. Cause that's so sad. One day someone will read this poem, and it will HELP them to understand this is not the way. YOU MAY NEVER KNOW, BUT YUR POEM saved a life, maybe 2 brilliant

I love this poem.
it helped me to understand that, i too, must forgive "him".

as hard as it may be to realize... not evryone has the "sit down to eat, sign songs together, act like a perfect little family" background..
i like the fact that you made him have a "poor" backgroudn because it seems more realistic.

Great job!

XxAshleyxX

Leave it how it is dont change it at all i hate theat its from a rapist point of view but u always need to look at both sides aye.. Very hard for u too right i bet.. Hard for me to read being a victim of Molestation and Rape

Keep writing

Leave it as it is. Spectacular work. I give you credit for having the guts to write it. People need to think of things from the other point of view.

Wow this is amazing...well written

Ur poem is awesome and I did like it the way it is...U r talented...keep it up 5/5

This is a powerful poem....Im sorry if this ever happened to you, but this is a beautiful poem 5*5

This is very wonderful. i know how hard this must have been to write. i don't know if i would have been able to.

Ohh this is deepthanx for my comment, your poems are awesome, they are all from someone elses eyes, but so far ive only read the first 3..

your really good, dont ever give this up, cos u no what ur dooing, and what ur focus is,

x0x0x

I read everyones comments only now, and they are all right, it isnt easy seeing it all the time from others, but it makes the situation cleara, i wish i cud see the eyes through someone who went through with suicide, that i cant begin to understand, i have been close to the point, but i cant see why they wud just stop, and why wud u hurt someone, u can see it and sharing it with people who dont understand why, to read this they wud feel a little bit better i gues!!

x0x0x

You're so strong to be able to write this from the other point of view, you have pure strength and I truely admire that. My heart goes out to you.

How can you even attempt to write from a criminals POV unless you've been there?rough flow...