by Natalie May 11, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
He promised me love. |
Well done, It was an awesome write! I agree with the previous comment to mine but aside from that, well done!! |
I enjoyed this awesome job this one could be tweeked a little bit by dividing some of lines differently other than that no changes r need on this one good job |
by Baby Rainbow
Lol i know the poems well i used to write many at that time lol. you done good well done xx |