Comments : Fruitless Connection

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Lol i know the poems well i used to write many at that time lol. you done good well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    I enjoyed this awesome job this one could be tweeked a little bit by dividing some of lines differently other than that no changes r need on this one good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Well done, It was an awesome write! I agree with the previous comment to mine but aside from that, well done!!