With this gun to my head
I look up at you
and give you the first genuine smile
that has ever graced my lips....

This warm liquid
now dripping down my face,
I fall limply to the floor,
peace instilled in my eyes

and that sweet smile left there on my face for all to see....

see what i mean? that makes it more easy to read and it actually sound a lot better. these little pieces you write are good keep them up xx