Loose Threads

by brie kelly wise   May 11, 2008


You're dangling on a loose thread
You're dangling around in my head
You're pulling too tight
You won't even let me put up a fight
You're seeing the real me
You're finding out what I could be

If doubt controls us completely
I'm losing all feeling
Our trust turned out to be deceiving
My love for you is leaving

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Excellent ending, well done x