Comments : Overtaken

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Again this is too very powerful, well done xx keep writing xx

  • 16 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    I really like this it is sad but yet touching!
    i love how you put this part:

    "I miss who you used to be
    All the jokes we would share
    Now drugs have corrupted
    The fact that you care"

    i love how you put it like that it was really good nice poem! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    So very emotional. Excellent poem. Keep up the great work. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    I liked it. it reminded me of my aunt and her family and all the struggles they have gone through....are going through.

    well done 5/5
    ~Ben

  • 15 years ago

    by Jackie

    I like this poem a lot, so sad how drugs affects families. My favourite stanza was

    I miss who you used to be
    All the jokes we would share
    Now drugs have corrupted
    The fact that you care

    So sad. 5/5

  • 3 years ago

    by Michelle Fuller

    Wow I can't believe how my work is still here after so many years.