Hmmmm.. grammar mistakes
Your english is not all that well
YOu need to improve I must say honestly.....
Its like you are trying to write cos evryone writes...
Elizabeth see you just soend some more time with your poems and read them again after finishing
Sorry if I am acting like a jerk but I guess we are here to be better:-)
tc
4/5

Rohan

If you wanna know about the errors just let me know
I will tell you

I can feel what u r goin through..It's really hard..
I loved the poem so much
Good job,keep it up:)

I don't wanna iritate your day..but your poem hurts my head...because..

it made me cry...aww..its a nice poem..it strucks me..i can relate..

continue writing and practice...sure u'll make a very nice poem...