Comments : As You Sleep

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    another great poem, If i didn't knew you had a writers block, I wouldn't notice it at all. Its a sweet poem and I think that many can relate to it. one little mistake: From this word --> from this world.
    keep it up 5.5
    kisses stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awwww this is so sweet, again i relate to this andi know exactly what you mean, you feel so safe to fall asleep with them but at the same time you just get lost watching them breathe and look so at peace.

    great job you have me interested in these ones now lol xx