Hey,
I like your poem, the subject is sweet and I enjoyed reading it. there is only one little thing that I think is wrong: I get lost in thought --> I get lost in thoughts.? keep up the good work 5.5
kisses stephanie

Awww this is so sweet hun, i liked this cos i know exaclty what you mean about eyes, for years i have avoided eye contact but my soulmate was always able to look me in the eyes andi remember feeling so safe and comforted.

i loved this i really did, you described the eyes and feelings of safety so well.

great job xx

S one caught my heart in a deep spot. u made me remember my high school love we always looked into eachothers eyes.. wow and u sure made me cry! tears are words the voice cant express