First Love

by Sebastian Han   May 11, 2008


When you are lying beside me
I feel like I have the whole world
When you are caressing me
I know your love have adorned my world

I miss you badly even you're around me
I am afraid of losing you if you don't talk to me
My love is emanating from the depth of my heart
I'll do everything to ensure we won't be apart

It cuts so deep when I hurt your feelings
I am sorry for making you unhappy
I will always salvage all the things
My girl, I will prove my sincerity

I won't abnegate the chance to say I love you
I want to cherish every moment to be with you
All I ever wish is to see you eye to eye
If I say I don't miss you and that is a lie.

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  • 16 years ago

    by benjamin

    This was an ok poem.. i think .. for the ryhmes though you used the same word .. me .. then me ... or world .. then world .. try to find something that ryhmes .. unless your are trying to prove a point.. then you can repeat that word or couple of words other wise you got the point across pretty well..

  • 16 years ago

    by Lakota

    Wow, t hat is such a beautiful poem!! You must really love this person. One of my favorite lines was: I miss you badly even you're around me
    I am afraid of losing you if you don't talk to me.
    I feel that way to with my significant other. I feel that if we don't communicate, I'm afraid we're drifting apart. But anyway, this really was a nice and heart felt poem. Keep up the beautiful work!!

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