Wow, t hat is such a beautiful poem!! You must really love this person. One of my favorite lines was: I miss you badly even you're around me
I am afraid of losing you if you don't talk to me.
I feel that way to with my significant other. I feel that if we don't communicate, I'm afraid we're drifting apart. But anyway, this really was a nice and heart felt poem. Keep up the beautiful work!!

This was an ok poem.. i think .. for the ryhmes though you used the same word .. me .. then me ... or world .. then world .. try to find something that ryhmes .. unless your are trying to prove a point.. then you can repeat that word or couple of words other wise you got the point across pretty well..