by LyricallyDamaged May 11, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Life was how it started, yet that was filled with pain. |
by H E Losey
I really enjoy your idea here and your thoughts are uniquely applied. |
by Ike Dizzle
Awesome job but i got one suggestion. Break it up into stanzas so people won't think it's so long lol. I like the way you thought in this poem though. |