Comments : Pretending

  • 16 years ago

    by XxxBeenThereRockedThatxxX

    Great write...! Loved it....very good with your words especially!

  • 16 years ago

    by Thomas

    Beautifully written. I can relate to this, except from a guy's view point. Very good job.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Itz so lovely...

    Wish u gud luck 4 d contest..

    Tremendous poem..

    Keep it up,

    best wishz... Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by fearose

    "Your smile is as beautiful as a rainbow
    after a hurricane."

    Beautiful. Purely beautiful. I really, really liked this line. It was gorgeous. The last stanza, the last line - it brings everything together again. Like sewing up loose ends. Brilliant, beautiful, everything about this is lovely. 5/5