Comments : Branded a Traitor

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow.
    i'm speechless again.
    just like...wow.

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    You ARE NOT SIK. If thee is a god. Here is a question....if u kill all is forgotten. being Gay is genetic. You were b4 birth (my opinion) LIVE FOR YOU.. BEAUTIFUL POEM. i actually felt yur pain. and I am Not GODLY. I AM A LESBIAN GODESS. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by aknives sweet kiss

    You are not that sick trust me sad poem but very well written 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Scarlet Angel

    Wow!!! all i can say is wow!!!! it has soo much feeling!!! dont worry the lord loves you and he understands!!! im praying for u hun!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by desiring love

    Wow great emotion!

  • 16 years ago

    by Janalicious14

    Wow.. this one is nice too..
    ahaha..
    you're a good writer!!!
    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by myblackfairytale

    Hey listen your not sick i get whqt your going through.. Hun the lord loves you no matter what.. he will always even if your dnt want him to.. Hit me up if you ever want to talk. xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    I love this poem
    100/5!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Your not sick. I liked it, it was really good. Bravo.

  • 16 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Great poem :o

    i liked the symbolism in it :) i found like 3 or 4 different meanings when i was reading it :D..in my opinion poetry shouldnt have just one meaning...it should have several tp make it an interesting/suspenseful read

    good job

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by emiley

    Wow..sounds like my life story! but your still a great writer!!

  • 16 years ago

    by emiley

    Wow. ummm i love it but its wow...i can sooo paint a picture great job!!!