Comments : Alcoholic Release.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobody

    Wow thats how i feel all the time keep writing you way good

  • 16 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    =O
    Beautifully written but so sad!
    I adore this line ---> The burning liquid whispers things I long to hear.

    It reminds me of someone in my family.

    Simply superb.
    As long as your writing, i'm reading. =P
    Much love.
    Kat x

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Wow. That was so amazing. It doesn't have much of a stucture, but that helps with describing how uncontrolable her drinking is. It is very sad and emotional, yet happy in a way. Even though she's releasing her emotions in a counter-productive way, she's still releasing her emotions.It is even sadder when you realize a lot of people's lives are like this. Very excellant job.
    Keep writing,
    Rado