A well written and descriptive poem. You have made an excellent job of tying the whole piece together with Every touch, kiss and look. All actions that were once full of genuine love now hollow, unrequited!

Well done

Michael

Truly well written poem. Whole piece sounds like it's written straight from the heart and I like your choice of words a lot. You created interesting and captivating imagery from the beginning to the end, along with really good rhythm and flow. Enjoyable read. I can relate to this in a way which made it even more powerful for me.
Keep up!

I really liked this poem, its becomes so powerful in such a small amount of time. and posing the question at the end, was an awesome way to finish off such a great read =)
keep up the good work!!
tom! 5/5
pssstt- i dont usually do this, but i would like you to rate one of my latest poems called watch =p
you rated for one of my other ones with a possitive responce, so even just looking at it would make my day xD