What I Am

by xxKelsey   May 12, 2008


Broken and cold,
My heart
Confused and forgotten,
My mind
Cut and bruised,
My body
Pointless and hated,
My life

-Writen by Dylan Walker

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  • 15 years ago

    by Xx Shiny StarxX

    I love it and i really can relly 2 it

  • 16 years ago

    by HuRtInG bEcAuSe Of YoU

    I liked it a lot. Kind of reminds me of my life. Good job, keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Your writing style is good. In few words you've expressed your feelings. Well constructed poem. Good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by PassionCourageTriumph

    This poem is sad yet very beautiful. It simply sounds good.

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Short and to the point
    liked you descriptions
    5/5
    Broken and cold,
    My heart-- like this part, good image