Ur really good!!!
5/5

I thought that this was pretty good. The only thing that I think that u should really work on would be ur flowing and writing detailed. Cuz u have the ability but u just didn't show it 2 much here. No offense. I'm not trying 2 be mean, just trying 2 help. But I did think that it was a good poem. Just needs a little more work. If u want, could u read my poem "Our Ecstasy"? I think that u would like it. If I didn't offend u. lol =P

.:Rach:.