by Chris Rodriguez May 12, 2008
category :
Life, society /
about society
Monday morning and you're still wandering around |
Fantasically written, and delightfully positive. This is EXACTLY the kind of writing that I like to see on here, and I also appreciate clever use of rhyme. It's easy to get bogged down in thinking how best to avoid cliches when you rhyme, and I'd say you have done here, and elegantly too. Nice one! |
Absolutely love the line |
by Aryaan
Beautiful poem friend! i loved each and every line of your poem. so much depth in your writing as i can feel it. this is the first of your poem i've read and it's a great experience. |