Beautiful poem friend! i loved each and every line of your poem. so much depth in your writing as i can feel it. this is the first of your poem i've read and it's a great experience.
'You feel your eyes corrode
And they found your friends in pieces on the road
So you know this winter's gonna be cold
Like last year...'
wonderful lines!

Absolutely love the line
smoek your troubles away..

i can totally relate!.
good word usage!

Fantasically written, and delightfully positive. This is EXACTLY the kind of writing that I like to see on here, and I also appreciate clever use of rhyme. It's easy to get bogged down in thinking how best to avoid cliches when you rhyme, and I'd say you have done here, and elegantly too. Nice one!