I deeply enjoyed in this piece, it is truly beautiful and greatly written from the beginning to the end.

I have just two critics: You should change every '&' with 'and', it would look nicer and in the last line "that be forever" is not used with correct tense. It should be "that'll be forever".

Overall, this is enjoyable read, a poetic gem filled with heartfelt emotions that flow through every stanza. I like the flow and rhythm that you created through the whole poem.

The first and the second stanza are my favorite, they pulled me deeply into this poem and every word there seem perfectly picked.

Great job :)
Keep up,
5/5 from me

Really nice write n totally agree wth Nyell abt 1 and 2 stanzas are beautiful.

All the very best.
Good job
5/5

I liked ur poem alot it was very sweet. u did great filling it with all ur mixed emotions.. nice job! 5/5 always
Kate~

Pretty great poem ...

This was very beautiful and touching. Amazing how our emotions overtake us sometimes. But then again, of course, because Dil to Pagal hai!

Keep it up hunz really gud poem

Although it is meaningful, it seems more like a letter than a poem. Not something deserving of the front page. Nice try though.

I like this..loads 5/5

I like your poem i feel as if it was composed especially for me...