Yeah fren jus take a break...

it was a joke... someone.... Really

U r absolutely right.. we feel sum1... sumone special.. sumwhere... who would always talk, care, share, hold on.... pray etc...etc... for us....

Lovely poem again....

Keep writing,

best wishes,

karan

Totally agree wth Karan

Its more like a need to be fulfilled and we all looking for that some1 who can feel wht we feel n who can sense our emotions which we cant share....

Great poem again!!!

God bless u

I don know what to say about this poem, it's excellent, wonderful and so expressive... lov it

This an amazing write that is filled with so much of emotions expressed so nicely to enhance the epitome of despair. Excellent and truly simplicity has it's greatest rewards in the conveyance of emotions. 5/5

Awwww Adel!

You will always have my friendship!
This poem is so sad, not at all what I would expect from you. You always tell me to never let myself get down by life and all the ass holes that cross my path:)
Chin up, sweetheart...you will find your special somone one day and maybe even sooner than you think ~winks~

Love, Ingrid

I am confused by these poems you have wrote....whats going on ?

I extremely am in love with this poem right about now.

I, in my opinion, I believe this iz your best poem yet! i absolutely enjoyed it the whole way through...dont feelz so alone i alwayz fake a smile my self all the time to hav peepz not worry bout me...and once in awhile we all feel like we wana run away from life...our problems..the generation we live in today iz just terrible...the sad thing iz running away usually doesn't solve our problems...it would be a whole lot simpler wouldn't it tho? anywayz loved the poem and dont worry bro! i'm absolutely positive you'll find sum1 special!
xoxo
-d

There are more of us that feel like this, so remember - you are not alone. you are only an email away from people who understand that you can share your troubles with. I echo your word cos I share the same feelings

After reading this, a few times...to really take in your feelings.....it came to me, that you have explained in perfect detail how each and every HUMAN, feels at one time in their life.......to pinpoint exactly the emotions one goes through, is a difficult task....and you my friend, have done an excellent job at it......

wonderful, WONDERFUL piece.....

salwa~

Totally can completly relate to that..very nice writing with this one.

I really like this poem Adel. I can tell it is really from your heart and you mean every word. I know this feeling. I hope that everything is ok with you.
Listen to this advice: keep praying, and God will give you Someone to hold your hand.

I really enjoy this poem so much , and i know this feeling very well :) believe me if u feel all that that mean u r a good person and it very hard to find good ppl who will understand u. so u have to be happy and i hop u fine good and honest ppl in ur life .
well done.5/5

Great poem, describes everyone's life at some point.

"Yeah, I guess this is what I need
A partner for my soul and heart
Someone like true friend or lover
Someone to fill my missing parts"

This part was amazing. Everyone needs that, everyone is looking for that.

"Yeah, I guess this is what I need
A partner for my soul and heart
Someone like true friend or lover
Someone to fill my missing parts"

the ending was thee best part.
it is so relateable and the emotions were so raw, nice write!

Oh my god. i can ensure you that this was the most magnificent poem i have ever read, each word of it described my situation, because i have always felt the same thing that you felt, but i couldn't really express this feeling to the people around me because i couldn't find words, but i guess you have found them.
what amazing.