Haha..it made made me laugh because its so true.. once we mess up we want to star over , but most of the time we cant right?????
i liked it good job!

Aly

This is my first time reading this type of poetry. I have to admit it's really good. I'll suggest to you that you put the poetry type/format at the end.

Anyway, when I was reading this poem. I picture a girl who's at the exam who forgot what to write the answers for the question.

Another interpretation I had was... A girl was giving a speech in class who had a mental block.

Anyway lovely poem, good imagery. I Enjoyed reading it.

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Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed
as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines. It was developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.