The day before

by noha   May 12, 2008


The day before that night,
I thought you weren't by my side.

Everything went wrong,
I wish i could be strong.

Why did you leave if you really loved me,
all this pain that you hide,in your eyes i can see.

Silent moment,deep breath.
On my own,my heart starts to freeze.

To wake to the ring of the phone,
and know that I will not be alone.

I heard your voice ,
I can't believe it was really you.

Its all I ever could have hoped for,
Like a dream now come true.

All the words I wanted to say,
they left my head,just flew away.

When I heard your voice,
It brought a smile to my face.

When I heard your laugh,
my heart began to race.

for together we have joined our souls,
so we may help each other to fulfill our goals.

^^^
its about special day for me,i was by my own
i wish to hear his voice and everything back,
and he suddenly call me and we talk and laugh,
for while i feel that everything back but in reality its not.
so i write this good feeling i have that time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxWorthlessxX

    Wow. this is an amazing poem.
    It seems like a lot of emotion for you was in this.
    It must have been a very special day for you to hear his voice again.
    Amazing.
    Keep it up. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Well this was a very sweet poem.
    But you didn't keep a consistant flow.
    You changed the flow the the rhyming
    pattern at the end and that through off
    the poem. But well done.
    <3Tay 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Awww.. how simple yet a very touching poem reminds me of a feling of bing loved and loving someone.. great work

  • Very good poem. It was filled with happiness and sadness all at once! I think you did an excellent job. Keep up the good work and you will continue to improve.

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    A simply amazing piece of poetry. i believe that yoou are an absolutely brilliant writer. i feel sorry for your loss, how everything is not back but it is good to write down how you felt at that time.

    a most wonderful write!

    5/5

    Keep Writing, hun
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~