A lovely poem from NOHA again.... |
by so
Beautiful |
by noha
Thanks for the helpfull comment and i fix it |
Very good write....the flow was even.....keep writing! |
This is nicely written from the beginning to the end. It holds many feelings that can reach out to the readers yet I think that you have some punctuation/grammar errors through the piece. |
by Sourav
It's a good intense poem. It evolves a lot of emotions. I liked it. Good to read. |
Well i though it was beautiful. i loved it. |
by Illusion
Well written 5/5 |
It was very nice poem, i wish that moment of happiness to be repeated again and stay forever |
I wish if i could be strong. |
I can relate to the situation nice poem and write, i liked the sadness and hapiness in it. |
This poem is cute^u^ |
by NinjaGirl
A simply amazing piece of poetry. i believe that yoou are an absolutely brilliant writer. i feel sorry for your loss, how everything is not back but it is good to write down how you felt at that time. |
Very good poem. It was filled with happiness and sadness all at once! I think you did an excellent job. Keep up the good work and you will continue to improve. |
by ECILA ice
Awww.. how simple yet a very touching poem reminds me of a feling of bing loved and loving someone.. great work |
Well this was a very sweet poem. |
Wow. this is an amazing poem. |