Awww this is so sad.. falling in love with your best friend can be tough. if this is true.. im so sorry.

the poem flowed nicely. i enjoyed it.

"I was just a young girl
Slowly falling in love
With a certain young boy
Her gift from above"

^^im pretty sure in the last line of this stanza you meant to put "My" instead of "her"

but great job.5/5