Loved how you rhymed in this one....it made the flow easier and more interesting...great write! Also its descriptive and has a good choice of words...

I think this is an okay piece. It had it's ups and downs. The ups- the wording and structure, particularly in the last two stanzas. The downs - some of the rhymes, especially in stanza three. The rhyme were far too basic, and didn't really give the piece power, but, I feel, it actually took it away.

As I say, the last two stanza I thought were the best, and as I'm sure you know, it'simportant to end a poem on a strong point, as you did.

Brad

Sad but also truthful yet again great job

Such meaning and power were embedded in your words and it just truly blew me away! It flowed nicely and was inspiring to read. Welll done *5/5*

What really caught my attention is the thought that every individual suffers from agony because of regrets.. and if we have only did it much better then we will not be in a place where we are currently at.