Thoughts

by Cyma Khan   May 12, 2008


How can one see,
when there isn't a hope to see

How can one's heart glow
when there isn't a desire to love

How can one's mind resist
when there isn't a courage to stress

How can one's step tumbles
when there isn't a path to follow

How can one love
when there isn't a fear to loose.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Hey, good poem sis
    i liked the title too

    i think it will look more beatufil if you added few more lines...not too much just few more

    but overall it was a good poem espcially the last line

  • 16 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Nice poem....take care and keep smiling always...

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Very well written sad love poem... this poem realy so deep... it was short thoug but it was so well written.. and true feelings towards the love ones..

    great workk you got 5

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    How can one... when

    Cuz "when" itself says there is a hope...

    Lovely poem Cyma...
    Good 2 read a poem from u always...

    Keep up d good work..

    best wishz... Karan

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Cyma Khan