These Feelings

You showed your emotions very well in this poem although I think if you put a bit more detail in it could be better. But if you were going for simple i can see that and relate to it. sometimes our best work is when we keep it simple.
i look forward to reading your other work
Well Written

"You've taught me how to learn to love and never live without a care."
I think 'taught me how to love' is fine
never live without care? as in never carefree?
The words don't smooth over.
That last line didn't do it for me D:
3/5

Can relate to this one. I liked it ad the format was good. Nice word choice.

I would join the first and 2nd stanza together though. To help with the flow a little. 5/5

That is very sweet and sounds very sincere, especially when you say that you cannot hide these feelings. but there was bot anything that really caught my eye. i mean the poem is sweet, but kinda common. as a girl i perfectly understand emotions through the poem that can be expressed with such simple words. but as a poet i think you could add something in your poem, like and exceptional metaphor or a vivid image or a bright and uncommon comparisson so the poem became eye-catching and unique.
for this reason i rated it 4/5
keep up good work:)