For Gods grace I think it should be God's grace seeing how you're stating that it is something God owns or has the quality of.

The only other things I have to say is after a while you started capitalizing the F in for and the spacing between punctuation isn't correct, but that doesn't really matter so much.

I really enjoyed the poem. The structure of how you began each line the same was lovely. The rhyming seemed consistent the poem was easy to understand. It flowed nicely. I give you a five out of five.

Well Jim i'm not going to give you a lesson in english I just think it's a beautiful thing when a person comes from a rather testing past and can sit back and reflect and be thankful.I thought it was one of your best yet.I thank you my friend